Thursday, April 28, 2011
new introduction
Everyone have a different role to do. Some people have to take care of children and be a breadwinner for the family. Others are obligated to help for old or sick parents. Sometimes parents and children have to reversal their roles. But changing a role with own parents has several diasavantages.
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iwona,, i really agree with your post. when a children take the responsability from their parents, they usually will feel frustated or overwhelmed about that situation.
ReplyDeleteIwona I realy like that introduction. I think the general statement is much beter right now than before. The thesis statement is great realy catch readers attention. Good job.
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